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Chapter 3 - Page 33

May 9th, 2019, 7:30 pm
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Meloh May 9th, 2019, 7:30 pm
Niko in full investigation mode! looks like she can summon stuff as well. that's a club president for you
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Aline1 May 9th, 2019, 7:46 pm
Huh it says it is page 35 when the previous page was 32.
Meloh May 9th, 2019, 7:46 pm
@Aline1: thanks Aline, this is page 33. just put 35 by accident! will fix it.
evilnidhogg May 9th, 2019, 8:11 pm
a magical girl and her familiar solving crimes
RazorD9 May 9th, 2019, 9:25 pm
@evilnidhogg: I'd watch that. Can either be called "Murder She Evoked" or "Hogwarts 99".
Toxicodendron May 10th, 2019, 2:21 pm
@RazorD9: I would go with "Murder She Evoked" however I will say that an original title may get it to an even better level, hmm. Ok, I'll need to know what type of familiar that is to incorporate it into a possible title.
Meloh May 16th, 2019, 11:27 pm
@Toxicodendron: haha! i need to make a spin off now. brb guys! lol jkjk
Burgerbob17 May 9th, 2019, 10:11 pm
i hate to be a grammar nazi, but you used the wrong too in "running off to far" you would use too instead of to
Meloh May 16th, 2019, 11:27 pm
@Burgerbob17: thanks burger, will fix it soon
DarkFlameOSecrets May 10th, 2019, 1:19 am
So cute!!!
Meloh May 16th, 2019, 11:28 pm
@DarkFlameOSecrets: glad you think so dark!
dracone May 10th, 2019, 8:18 am
I noticed a minor error, "Running off to far."

that "to" needs an extra o
Meloh May 16th, 2019, 11:28 pm
@dracone: thanks dracone,going to fix it.